QuadBlogging on Kereru School

This week our partners for commenting on was Kereru creator's blog.

Here is my comment that I have posted on there blog.

If you want to visit there blog and comment on it here is the link

http://kererucreators.edublogs.org/ 

Parent's Teacher conference

Hi everyone this is my student conference for term 3. Here you will find my read, writing, maths and key competencies goals for term 3.

My 4 Sentence Recount

This is my 4 sentence recount that I done about my hoilydays.

Term 2 Reflection

Hi Everyone this is my end of the term reflection.

If you have some tips and trick please live me a comment down below so I can work on them and achieve them too.

Thank you.

Backward-Looking:

What have been your learning highlights this term?

I have learnt this term is to tell if the square or other shapes is 90 degrees or 180 degrees and even 270 degrees. I also learnt how to translate different object or shapes even letters to the other side so it will look like there is  mirror on the other side.

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Inward-Looking:

What were your Learner Profile goals for Term 2? Have your goals changed? Are you on track to meet your goals?

My Learner Profile that I set myself for this would be  to be a self monitoring learner and a open-minded learner too. The goal that I really set myself was to be a self directed learner that means I am on track every time and doing the right thing at the right time.

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Outward-Looking:

If you were the teacher, what comments would you make about your learning so far?

If I was the teacher I will set myself 3 or 2  goals and I will try to achieve those goals. I will also ask the students 1 wish and star for me so I know which ones that I need to work with them and myself.

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Forward-Looking:

As you look back at your learning so far, what's one thing that you would like to try to improve upon?

I will try to improve all of my maths task because I did not complete that much maths task on this term.

Commenting on Room 8 Paerata School

Hi Room 8,
I am Rita from Hay Park School.
I really like the videos of the calf club floral demonstration day and all of the foods that you have made they looks so delicious.
I have a question about the calf club floral demonstration when can you celebrate calf club floral demonstration? What is so special about
calf club floral demonstration?

From Rita

Hi everyone this is my comment to Paerata School.
Here is the website for there Blog http://room8paerata.blogspot.co.nz/

5/06/2015 Speed write The Mysterious Shooting Stars (My draft 2 of My Information Report About Stars)

                                                   The Mysterious Shooting Stars             

                    

[Introduction]

Have you ever wondered how a star is formed well you're in luck keep on reading and you will get those answers. Some stars comes only on Matariki ,those stars are all sisters,. Did you know that all the star in our galaxy has its own story .

[Paragraph 1 -Life cycle of a star]

All stars are born in the center of nebulae. Nebulae is a huge clouds that is made out of  dust and gas. The dust and gas collapse under gravity forming protostars. These young stars goes further collapsing, forming main sequence stars. Some stars expand as they grow old. When a star is born there is a constant battle between the star and gravity.

[Paragraph 2 -Types of stars]

Some stars are yellow, blue and red. Also did you know that the sun is a star and it is the closest star to earth? The stars that are red is a dwarf stars. There are also dwarf giant stars. Some stars are double that means there are two stars together to form a double star. The biggest star discovered by astronomers is the VY canis Majors.

[Paragraph 3 -General Information]

In Ancient times civilization knew when a year had passed by observing changing patterns in the star.

Did you know that the force of gravity inside is so intense that nothing can escape it, not even light?

When a giant star begins to die, its core, or center, shrinks. Did you know that all star in our galaxy has a story?

[Conclusion]

An exploding star three time larger than the sun will leave behind a core about 25 kilometres (15 miles across. Some star are like a ball of fire made out of gas and Heat. Stars has different colours from each other. But some star has the same. All star in our solar system is born in the center of nebulae.

My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)	yes
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way	yes
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification	yes
outlines the main features of the subject	yes
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)	yes
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject	yes
give detailed information (factual descriptions)	yes
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found

4/6/2015 Speed Write The Mysterious small appearance in the night sky

My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)	yes
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way	yes
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification	yes
outlines the main features of the subject	yes
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)	yes
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject	yes
give detailed information (factual descriptions)	yes
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found

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Begin Writing Here:

                                                 The Mysterious small appearance in the night sky                   

                    

[Introduction]

Have you ever wondered how a star is formed well you're in like keep on reading and you will get those answers. Some stars comes only, on Matariki those stars are all sisters. Stars are made out of gas and dust. Did you know that all the star in our galaxy has its own story?

[Paragraph 1 -Life cycle of a star]

All stars are born in the center of nebulae. Nebulae is a huge clouds of dust and gas collapse under gravity forming protostars. These young stars goes further collapse, forming main sequence stars. Some stars expand as they grow old. When a star is born there is a constant battle between the star and gravity.

[Paragraph 2 -Types of stars]

Some stars are yellow, blue and red and  also did you know that the sun is a star and it is the closest star to earth ?. Some stars are red those stars are dwarf stars. There are also dwarf giant stars. Some stars are double that means there are two stars together to form a double star. The biggest star discovered by astronomers is the VY canis Majoris.

[Paragraph 3 -General Information]

In Ancient times civilization knew when a year had passed by observing changing patterns in the star.

Did you know that the force of gravity inside is so intense that nothing can escape it, not even light?

When a giant star begins to die, its core, or center, shrinks. Did you know that all star in our galaxy has a story?

[Conclusion]

An exploding star three time larger than the sun will leave behind a core about 25 kilometres (15 miles across. Some star are like a ball of fire made out of gas and Heat. Stars has different colours from each other. But some star has the same. All star in our solar system is born in the center of nebulae.