5/06/2015 Speed write The Mysterious Shooting Stars (My draft 2 of My Information Report About Stars)

                                                   The Mysterious Shooting Stars             

                    

[Introduction]

Have you ever wondered how a star is formed well you're in luck keep on reading and you will get those answers. Some stars comes only on Matariki ,those stars are all sisters,. Did you know that all the star in our galaxy has its own story .

[Paragraph 1 -Life cycle of a star]

All stars are born in the center of nebulae. Nebulae is a huge clouds that is made out of  dust and gas. The dust and gas collapse under gravity forming protostars. These young stars goes further collapsing, forming main sequence stars. Some stars expand as they grow old. When a star is born there is a constant battle between the star and gravity.

[Paragraph 2 -Types of stars]

Some stars are yellow, blue and red. Also did you know that the sun is a star and it is the closest star to earth? The stars that are red is a dwarf stars. There are also dwarf giant stars. Some stars are double that means there are two stars together to form a double star. The biggest star discovered by astronomers is the VY canis Majors.

[Paragraph 3 -General Information]

In Ancient times civilization knew when a year had passed by observing changing patterns in the star.

Did you know that the force of gravity inside is so intense that nothing can escape it, not even light?

When a giant star begins to die, its core, or center, shrinks. Did you know that all star in our galaxy has a story?

[Conclusion]

An exploding star three time larger than the sun will leave behind a core about 25 kilometres (15 miles across. Some star are like a ball of fire made out of gas and Heat. Stars has different colours from each other. But some star has the same. All star in our solar system is born in the center of nebulae.

My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)	yes
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way	yes
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification	yes
outlines the main features of the subject	yes
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)	yes
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject	yes
give detailed information (factual descriptions)	yes
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found