The 100 word challenge is about a challenge that schools around the world enter and they have to write a story with 100 words, this my story . ``Oh no ! shouted Jerry , “ Look out Tom !” running through the egg forest . A huge exploded came from their favorite egg in the forest in Mt Roskill . When they got there the egg was exploding like a volcano and inside of the egg was milking lava . Jerry started to clam up the egg and see if anything is inside . Well Jerry was doing that Josh was saying aaaa WHAT HAPPENED HERE this was my favorite egg place . We have to go and tell the investigating means to came and see what happened here . After that everything was covered in milking lava .
Hi Rita,
ReplyDeleteWell done on coming up with a very original story from the photo prompt this week.
Remember to use speech marks when writing dialogue, it really helps the reader to clearly see what is being said. Another handy tip is to always read your work out loud to yourself when you have finished, this way you can hear if you have missed out any words or identify any spelling mistakes.
Keep up the good work.
Libby (team100)
Hi,Rita
ReplyDeleteI really like your story it was really interesting and fun keep up the hard work and the egg looks yummy.
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