I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
Namaste Rita, I really like how you used commas to make it 4 sentences. I know it is really tricky to only do 4 sentences about one whole holiday because I did it too. I know how important mother daughter/father son time is, so when you and your mum went to sylvia park it must of been very special. On a scale of 1 to 10 how big is sylvia park.
Namaste Rita,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used commas to make it 4 sentences. I know it is really tricky to only do 4 sentences about one whole holiday because I did it too. I know how important mother daughter/father son time is, so when you and your mum went to sylvia park it must of been very special. On a scale of 1 to 10 how big is sylvia park.
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